Score: 8

"Mixed interest"

submission: Smile!

date: May 4, 2004

Aleksander Wasilewski's Flash capabilities are not in question here. It was very slow and soft but tastefully executed. So far, I've read several reviews on "Smile" giving a simple synopsis on conformity. This piece houses a straight forward issue of sociological assimilation. Contrarily to George Orwell's "1984", the Smile Party murders non-conformists instead of forcing adaptation. The character before the Smile Party openly displayed hesitation to the members and was killed. The lewd sex afterwards only accentuates the power spin and lack of afterthought the robots presumably perform each "session". This Flash, alternatively, has a message of faceless redistribution of domination. *I admire your potential and hope to see more of your work. Please reply if desired. - Reveal

Score: 7

"Reveal is now thinking of buying a cell phone*"

submission: Mani Golf

date: January 23, 2004

Considering that this is your only submission and that it was a prototype that you created shortly after learning Flash, i'm sure almost any cell phone company would jump on the opportunity for this game. It's simple, clean and highly addictive. My only complaints are that it is too short (but since it's a demo we can all let it slide, as you WILL be making another :). Also, on the last level, there seems to be a glitch on the right section of the course where the ball takes a strange bounce backwards or rolls onto a gap where it should fall down instead. Other than that, the settings and physics of the game were impressive, and i truly hope you make other games with computer standard dimensions. Great work!

Score: 2

"Ehh.."

submission: BOB&Z:1 - Blow %$&* up

date: January 11, 2004

That was weak. I gave you a 5 on graphics because the tree explosion was better. Since i haven't seen your other work, i'm unaware as to whether you have ability, or if you do this type of movie on a regular basis.

Score: 9

"Another great sim date"

submission: Love Hina sim date RPG

date: January 10, 2004

This is fun for hours. The girls are crazy and the comments often catch you off guard. (I spat out a mouthful of Heineken laughing at something Shinobu said). It's vulgar and has absolutely no educational value. This, however, does not take it away from being a 9/10 and 5vote. "Hey, were not here to learn!" I didn't like the navigational arrows at first, but eventually they grow on you and offer a new style of movement that can be interesting. The fighting is good yet it happens a bit too often. There are many items to buy/win, battles to do and stats to improve; so it proves to be very elaborate. I have to admit that i find Ganguro Girl more stylish due to its powerful creation with Macromedia Flash. On the other hand, Love Hina sim date RPG is stacked with girls. The lack of hentai was disappointing, although one can't complain. One of the major drawbacks i found was that when dating, you could sometimes lose up to 8 days on a date. Losing a few days is fine, but when you date 8 girls simultaneously the days start to drain quickly. Also, the date questions that the girls ask are usually the same, making it very easy. I enjoyed all the spoilers, good idea! The game is well animated and designed. We all look forward to more of your work. A solid 9/10. I gave you a protection point as well, I’m glad to see it prosper.

Reveal

Score: 3

"Putain is right"

submission: God is French: Genesis 1

date: January 9, 2004

First off, "Pleasure" is not a french word. It's "Plaisir". Secondly, it's "Un plaisir", not "Une plaisir". "Un" and "Une" is simple elementary grade French . I don't see how this relates to anything. It can't be an insult, because no one is being offended. If anything, the French would be laughing at you for gramatical impairment. All in all this flash sucked.

Score: 6

"Mixed"

submission: DVP: Soul Vengeance

date: January 4, 2004

"DVP: Soul Vengeance" is well constructed, and your animating skills are very classic in comic(book, mag) style. I found the dialogue to be weak and cliché which took away from a potentially strong production. As a movie, it's fun to watch as the stories and characters unfold. I have not frequented your other works, however I see that you are very good at what you do. Keep it up.

Reveal

Score: 9

"A beautiful short"

submission: Los Dias Sin Dias

date: January 3, 2004

Los Dias Sin Dias is a great movie with multiple messages. Since you're creation has stricken 19 pages of reviews i won't bother to decipher everything for reading purposes. It is very similar to Kol Belov's work (a legend), both graphically and psychologically. Noticeably you are both from Russia, which raises different questions. Not only do you deal with human conditions; death, fear, love and so forth, you're ability to intertwine elements of fantasy into messages is impressive. Although your "Author's comment" is a french quote about the power of love, i felt that love was not as strong an aspect as others (nevertheless highly present). There is only so far i can go with connotative criticism without feedback. Please reply if desired.

Continue with your work, it's very moving.
A fan,

Reveal

"Plus fort que la drogue, plus émouvant que la guerre, la fermentation de votre art inspire."
(Reveal, a propos Los Dias Sin Dias)

Score: 9

"Holdin' it's position"

submission: scratch spider

date: December 29, 2003

First off, a big shout out to Weebl for this clip. Scratch Perverts are a sick combo and it's surprising too see someone else know/feature them.
Everything flowed and worked out really well. I'm glad you threw in some breakin too! You should consider following up on this type of short movie with a hip hop feel, you seem to have a knack for it.
Good work Bro!

Score: 7

"Not too shabby"

submission: christmas elf eCard/Game

date: December 25, 2003

The game is addictive, i agree. But soon after you have to input a certain series to win, just like tic-tac-toe.

-You begin by "Make".
-Then, "Throw".
-Continue this until they "Defend" or "Make" instead of attacking.
-After hitting them for not attacking, select "Defend".
-This way you will take little damage and continue "Making" at the same pace as they do until you get back in sync with the cycle.
-If they're dumb enough to defend twice in a row you don't need this guide.

I played it shortly but it was good for what it was. For a simple office E-card, "Christmas Elf" is well done. Thumbs up!

Score: 6

"Vous êtes fous!"

submission: bonjour

date: December 23, 2003

Après avoir subis vos travaux précédent, j'ai notablement pris un interêt non-volontaire. En effet, c'est bien drôle mais il me semble que tu te forces à ce point pour produire des trucs encore plus malade que l'autre. Pour tout ceux qui disent qu'ils haïssent les Français parce qu'ils croient sembler a quelques-uns dans le clips, vous êtes que des crétins. Finalement j'ai rien d'autre a mentionné, sauf que c'est batard vos créations. J'èspére en revoir.

En kiffant de Montréal,

Reveal